So I've removed the story as its now part of a book ive released.
not because i dont want ILF people to read it, as I think most who wanted to read it already have anyway, but just controlling what comes up on Google search.
Last edited by samzadgan on Tue Apr 18, 2017 3:57 am, edited 1 time in total.
so for anyone that read the story...what did you think of it? any good?
if you dont want to put thoughts here, you can always PM me...
I am writing more, for some reason I've had a bit urge to write more of these kinds of stories...and if there's anything you think I can improve on, i will try and work it into my future writing.